Under Assault

I went for a blood draw at a nearby clinic the other day and–to make conversation to distract myself from the needle–asked whether they were doing any prep or prevention linked to Ebola.

“Yes,” said the technician. “We just ordered gowns and masks.”

Then she added. “We are going deep.”


Taking the Mystery out of this Top 10

Great American novelist Elmore Leonard personalized this Top 10 in 2001 for the New York Times: the 10 rules of good writing. The following is an abridged version of Leonard’s article, as noted on his death in Philly.com

1. Never open a book with weather.
2. Avoid prologues.
3. Never use a verb other than “said” to carry dialogue.
4. Never use an adverb to modify the verb “said”…he admonished gravely.
5. Keep your exclamation points under control. You are allowed no more than two or three per 100,000 words of prose.
6. Never use the words “suddenly” or “all hell broke loose.”
7. Use regional dialect, patois, sparingly.
8. Avoid detailed descriptions of characters.
9. Don’t go into great detail describing places and things.
10. Try to leave out the part that readers tend to skip.

“My most important rule is one that sums up the 10,” he wrote. “If it sounds like writing, I rewrite it.”